Jammer Dinner

Brandon A. & Franniee W.
November 30, 2011
English 10 - Period 2
Narrative Project

Jammer Thanksgiving Dinner

First-Person Narration from the Cartoonist’s Point of View
So last Monday night at the Hall of Champions foster youth from San Pasqual Academy came to celebrate a Thanksgiving dinner with Quentin Jammers from the San Diego Chargers and his friends and family. There were a lot of activities at the dinner who were including making a collage, me taking sketches and taking pictures with the Charger Girls a lot of sketches of the children there along with the other sketcher who was making funny pictures as I was doing soft and nice pictures. I got to interact with children and see what type of activities that they like to do. I took a break for a while and watch the children dance and then started to sketch more. It was time to leave but one more kid was waiting a long time so I asked them if they got me some food I would sketch him. So he got me some food and I sketched a picture of him and 2 girls and then I left.
Third-Person Omniscient Narration
So last Monday night at the Hall of Champions foster youth from San Pasqual Academy came to celebrate a Thanksgiving dinner with Quentin Jammers from the San Diego Chargers and his friends and family. There were a lot of activities at the dinner who were including making a collage, me taking sketches and taking pictures with the Charger Girls. It took a lot of sketches of the children there along with the other sketcher who was making funny pictures as one of the sketchers was doing soft and nice pictures. The sketcher got to interact with the children and see what type of activities that they like to do. One of the sketchers took a break for a while and watch the children dance and then started to sketch more. It was time to leave but one more kid was waiting a long time so one of the sketcher asked them if they get me some food the last sketcher would sketch him. So he got one of the sketcher some food and the sketcher sketched a picture of him and 2 girls and then the last sketcher left.
Narrator Expository Paragraph
The choice of narrator influences a story can make the story more define instead of just one person thoughts and feelings. If it was in first person you can only see what they are thinking and what they feel. You wouldn't be able to tell if the persons lying or not because you don't know what anyone else is thinking about. In 3rd person omniscient you can see what everyone was thinking. They know the past, present, and future and they can see whats every ones thinking and how they feel. That's how they can influence a story.